Here’s your chance to prove yourself…

This test is trickier than the Entrance Exam you may have taken in September – so take your time!

Fancy seeing Language doyen David Crystal in the flesh, A Level Language students?

Then sign up for our English Language trip!

All the details can be found on Parent Pay, where you can also sign up.

You can find the full agenda here. It’s going to be, as Mr Boulstridge would say, ‘#totesamazelols’.

You can download a copy of the issue here:

Sapere Aude – November 2018

Massive thanks to all of the students involved, and to Mrs Downie for coordinating. The next issue will be out in the new year. If you’ve got any suggestions for content, please email our editor, Eleanor Pilkington: e.pilkington08@lutterworthcollege.com.

We are recruiting new officers for the 2018-19 academic year.

To apply, click on the image above.

Take your time: a single mistake could cost you a place on the force!

The deadline for applications is Friday 2nd November 2018.

Good luck!

Right then, Year 11. First things first: congratulations on having sat your first GCSE Language mock exam. It was a big ask, and the majority of you rose to the occasion – so well done.

In this examiners’ report, we’ll be focusing on each question in turn, focusing on what you’d need to do to improve.

First things first

You should have been given a Mock Exam Attainment Tracker by your English teacher on which to record your marks for each question and each paper.

For each question, the number of rows corresponds to the number of marks available for that question. The width of the column relates to how much that question contributes to the overall mark for the paper. So, for instance, the columns for Q1 on both papers are half the width of the columns for Q2 – as both Q1s are worth 4 marks, whereas both Q2s are worth 8.

When you’ve shaded in these tables to reflect the marks you achieved for each question, you will be able to see where you did particularly well, and where there’s room for improvement.

Let’s take a sample student’s tracker for Paper 1.

As you can see, they scored 3/4 for Q1, 5/8 for Q2, 5/8 for Q3 and 8/20 for Q4 on the reading side of the paper. This gave them a total of 21/40 for the reading.

For the writing question, Q5, they got 16/24 for AO5 and 11/16 for AO6 – giving them a total of 27/40.

Their overall score of 48/80 would give them a grade 4 – but the student is only 2 marks away from getting a grade 5. Which question do you think they need to focus on the most?

We’d argue it’s Q4. The student is clearly bright, as they managed to get more than half marks for every other question – and yet they’ve dipped significantly on Q4.

If they’d achieved the same level for Q4 as they did Qs 2 and 3, the student would have achieved an extra 4 or 5 marks – which would have put them close to the boundary for a grade 6!

You should be using these trackers with your English teachers to identify where you need to focus your efforts when it comes to your next steps.

The Grade Boundaries

For both of your mock exams, we set the following grade boundaries:

General Feedback

• Students tended to achieve higher marks on the writing than on the reading.
• Q4 was the lowest-scoring question on both papers.
• Timing was an issue – with a significant number of students running out of time and having to rush the writing section, or skip reading questions in order to get to it before time ran out.

Priorities

• If you don’t yet have a copy of the My Revision Notes revision guide, you are missing out on some invaluable advice. It’s available from the library for just £6, and has activities, advice and hints for both English Language papers.
• Listen to the feedback your teacher has given you. It’s likely they will have pointed out the areas you ought to be focusing on – and you’ll find Next Steps for each of the questions further on in this post. The more hard work you put in now, the better the position you’ll be in for the real thing next year.

Paper 1: Explorations in creative reading and writing

Click on the links below for:

• The exam paper
• The insert
• The mark scheme

Paper 1 Question 1

Despite being a fairly straightforward question, several of you lost marks on this question as you:

• Forgot to write in sentences – e.g. ‘Inky fingers’ rather than He had ‘inky fingers’.
• Didn’t read the question, which asked you to focus on Hale, and not Brighton.

Suggested Next Steps:

• Read pages 12 – 13 of your My Revision Notes revision guides (available from the library for £6), and complete the activities.
• Have a look through, and make notes on, this PowerPoint.

Paper 1 Question 2

For this 8-mark question, you were given a short extract from the text to focus on, and you were asked to comment on the writer’s choice of: word and phrases, language features and techniques, and sentence forms.

Students who underperformed on this question did so because:

• They didn’t comment on all three of the bulletpoints.
• They were a little too vague in the comments they were making – e.g. The writer uses this word to get the reader’s attention.
• They forgot to comment on the impact of the language features on the reader.

Suggested Next Steps:

• Read pages 14 – 19 of your My Revision Notes revision guides, and complete the activities.
• Work through this PowerPoint.
• Download and print this grammar glossary so that you have a range of technical terms at your disposal for analysing texts.
• After you’ve done the above things, redo the question at home, and get your English teacher to see if you’ve improved.

Paper 1 Question 3

For this 8-mark question, you needed to comment on how the writer of the extract had structured it to interest you as a reader.

Common reasons for underperformance:

• Students didn’t comment explicitly on structure – i.e. why the text is in the order it’s in, and how the focus of the text shifts as it progresses.
• Students failed to use terms associated with structure – e.g. perspective, focus, zooms in.

Suggested Next Steps:

• Take a look at this Level 3 answer (6 out of 8 marks) that has been annotated by an examiner to show why it’s achieved that mark.
• Scroll through to the second answer in this document, as it achieved Level 4 (8 out of 8 marks). It’s also annotated to show how and why it’s achieved full marks. Read it carefully and make notes on why it’s successful.
• Read pages 20 – 25 of your My Revision Notes revision guides, and complete the activities. (You’re welcome to bring any work you’d like looking at to our GCSE English Drop-In sessions, which run every Tuesday lunchtime in L1A.)
• Work through this PowerPoint.
• After you’ve done the above things, redo the question at home, and get your English teacher to see if you’ve improved.

Paper 1 Question 4

This 20-mark question was one that many students struggled with, perhaps due to timing issues, or perhaps because they found it more challenging than the other questions.

For this question, you were given a statement about the text, and were asked to what extent you agreed with it.

Common issues that arose:

• Students contradicted the statement. Remember: the statement given to you by the exam board will always be a reasonable interpretation of the text, and will have been given to help direct your answer.
• Students drifted away from the focus of the question, and started writing about aspects of the text that didn’t relate to it.
• Students didn’t leave enough time for this question – even though, at 20 marks, it was worth the same amount of marks as questions 1, 2 and 3 combined.

Suggested Next Steps:

• Read through this Level 3 answer (16 out of 20 marks) and pay attention to the examiner’s comments justifying the mark.
• Scroll to the second answer in this booklet, as it achieved Level 4, and got full marks (20 out of 20). The examiner’s comments tell you why it achieved that mark. Make a note of these reasons.
• Read pages 26 – 34 of your My Revision Notes revision guides, and complete the activities. (You’re welcome to bring any work you’d like looking at to our GCSE English Drop-In sessions, which run every Tuesday lunchtime in L1A.)
• Work through this PowerPoint.
• After you’ve done the above things, redo the question at home, and get your English teacher to see if you’ve improved.

Paper 1 Question 5

This was the writing task, and you were given a choice of two tasks: a description inspired by a picture of a beach, or a description of an occasion when you felt unsure or challenged.

Common issues we found:

• Students had run out of time by Q5, and so rushed their writing. Remember: Q5 is worth 40 marks – which is the same as all 4 reading questions put together! You must make sure you leave 45 minutes for it.
• A lot of you wrote narratives despite the key word in both tasks being Describe. Remember: in the exam next summer, you may be given a choice of two narrative tasks, a choice of two descriptive tasks, or a choice between a narrative and a descriptive task. Make sure you’re doing what’s asked of you.
• Technical accuracy was an issue for many students, despite AO6 being worth 16 marks. You must make sure you’re leaving time to check your work, and to make any corrections.

Suggested Next Steps

• Take a look at the Level 4 response you’ll find here – it achieved 38/40 marks, and is thoroughly annotated with what the student has done well.
• Have a look at the second answer in this booklet, and decide if you think it deserves the same mark as the one above, or lower/higher. Your English teacher will be able to tell you if you’re correct!
• Find out how to avoid comma splicing by clicking here and reading our guide. You can then take the test to make sure you’ve got it sussed.
• Revise apostrophes using your CGP SPaG workbooks at home, and then take the test you’ll find here to make sure you’ve nailed it.
• Learn a good way to vary your sentences by clicking here and reading our guide to fronting and embedding. There’s a test to check if you’ve understood.
• Read pages 76 – 85 of your My Revision Notes revision guides, and complete the activities. (You’re welcome to bring any work you’d like looking at to our GCSE English Drop-In sessions, which run every Tuesday lunchtime in L1A.)
• Have another go at the question, and ask your teacher to check to see if you’ve improved.

Hello year 10!

Between Monday 2nd July and Thursday 12th July you’ll be completing your GCSE Speaking and Listening presentations!

Click here for our top tips post.

Click here for a folder of resources, including:

• the task sheet
• the PowerPoint you’ve seen in class
• the mark scheme
• the exemplar videos of students achieving each grade

Going to be in Year 10 in August?

Then this post is for you!

Your Tasks

1. Write a letter to your new year 10 teacher.

   In year 10 you will possibly have a new teacher for the rest of your GCSE course. He, or she, is really looking forward to meeting you! To help them get to know you a little better, over the summer you should handwrite them an informal letter telling them a bit about yourself. This is the first piece of work your new teacher will see, so make a good impression and put in your best efforts!

   Tips and advice can be found HERE and on SMHW

   Due: Your first English lesson after the summer.

   2. We would like you to read a fiction of a non-fiction book of your choice. This should be something suitably challenging given your move into year 10. See the attached reading list for some ideas. You will need to write a review of the book you have read and be ready to hand this in on the first lesson back. The review can be in a format of your choice

If you have any trouble over the holiday with these things email n.whitehill@lutterworthcollege.com

Enjoy the break!

On 13th June, Leicester’s own Jess Green will be visiting us at Lutterworth College and running a couple of performance poetry workshops for our students in KS3 and KS4.

She’s well-known for her powerful and provocative poetry – including her thought-provoking Dear Mr Gove, which amassed more than 300,000 views on YouTube a few years ago.

If you’d like to take part in one of Jess’ workshops on the 13th June, please complete the form you’ll find here.

Places are limited, and you have until Friday 4th May to register your interest.

We’ll then allocate places on a random basis and let you know by email if you’ve got one. Good luck!