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A couple of weeks ago, you all sat the following assessment:

‘Young people spend far too much time on social networks. It’s damaging their education, endangering their safety and destroying their ability to communicate.’

Write a letter to a broadsheet newspaper in which you explain your point of view on this statement.

Below, you’ll find two exceptionally strong responses to that task.

See if you can work out why they achieved such high marks:

Grade 8 Writing with a Viewpoint Exemplars