Year 11: have a goosey at this A* report


The task we set our Year 11 students was a tricky one:

Experts have predicted that by the year 2020 one third of the United Kingdom population could be obese. The principal at your school is looking at ways to address the problem, and has asked you – as head of the student council – to offer a student view.

Write a report for the principal in which you look at the ways in which the obesity epidemic could be tackled in your school.

Here’s a superb exemplar from one of our students. It’s on its way to full marks – and a certain A*.

What do you think?

Exemplar Report – A Star

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